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February 23, 2009
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I rarely go back and revisit a piece, always preferring to move on to the next project, but I really like the idea of this one and could see the potential in it for it to be better than it was - so here's the updated and improved piece (on the right), compared to the original piece on the left.

I know I've used the same style of clothing for the model, (and I used the same hat), but i wanted to show how I've improved with adding hair under hats (very difficult to do in poser). This was redone from scratch - it wasn't just opened up in Poser or anything like that. In fact, redoing it from scratch gave me the opportunity to see exactly where I'd gone wrong with the lighting in the first one. I'm much happier with the pose, I feel the lighting and textures are better, and I prefer that she's looking off camera as opposed to down the lens.

Original: [link]
Second: [link]

This is for the first category - 3D art.
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~fairlypseudo Jun 15, 2011
youve done such a huge improvement with the textures and shading *-* Its really amazing!
Also the others are right, the second one is so much more moody! Just keep on with your work ;)
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=Everild-Wolfden Jun 15, 2011  Professional Writer
Aw, thanks!!
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~Cacodaemonia Jul 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wow, amazing improvement! The mood in the second one is so much richer. :)
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=Everild-Wolfden Jul 7, 2009  Professional Writer
Thank you!
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~Anonymonkey May 26, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
The first one looks like a photo of that all on a mannequin, but the second one looks like it's a photo of all that on an actual human. Way more lifelike, definitely liking the hair here, and I agree with you you have improved so much on the lighting... :D
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=Everild-Wolfden May 27, 2009  Professional Writer
Thank you! :D
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~revesburger Feb 25, 2009
woah... huge diference :wow:
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=Everild-Wolfden Feb 25, 2009  Professional Writer
Hehe! Thanks! :D
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Mood: dA Love ~onriio May 29, 2009
Did you use a higher poly count on the second one?
love it :)
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=Everild-Wolfden May 30, 2009  Professional Writer
Yip, and better textures. Thanks!
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